Thread: Sandshrew hunt
View Single Post
  #3    
Old May 2nd, 2006, 01:47 PM
Kijuna's Avatar
Kijuna
Beginning Trainer
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Gender:
Nature: Calm
The problem with this fic isn't so much the story, it's too early in to tell anything along those lines yet. You should update only when a chapter's finished. Also, that red font is a bit eye-searing in such a large concentration.