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Old July 11th, 2006 (03:10 PM).
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Wow...that utterly blew me away. Such a fresh breath of originality. Kadabra's tone was perfectly executed through incoherent strings of words, and its meaning was almost scary. I absolutely loved the way you conveyed Jon's fear of staying in the game..it's amazing, the concept overall. I heart this one shot. It was such a unique outlook..wow. I couldn't notice any mistakes, too. If there were, I didn't see'em. Excellent job. o_o;;

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