Thanks for the reviews, guys! And sorry about that duplicate thread, too. 0_o
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. As to how I don't like it much personally... dunno, just feel like I've written better. I finished this on the same night that I wrote another one-shot, too, and I ended up thinking that the second one turned out better. That's probably why.
Whoah, ffotm?! I certainly wasn't expecting that! Thanks so much!
So anyway, uh... glad you liked the concept. I changed what I wanted to do with this one-shot several times as I went through, so it's nice to know it turned out all right in the end. Also, I hope that the kadabra's words weren't totally incomprehensible... they were somewhat important. ;
But yes, thanks so much for the reviews, and of course ffotm, too! Wow!