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Old November 25th, 2006 (08:34 PM). Edited November 25th, 2006 by Đ a r κ.
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Here is the plot but I want the plot to be longer so please give me some ideas on what I could add and what I could get rid of.

~Plot~
Over two thousand years ago, Omi, Raimundo, Clay and Kimiko fought in a battle against evil that determined the destiny of the earth and during this battle, master fung had died of old age and of a heart attack. After days and days of fighting and using their elemental powers, the battle was won by the four monks. Then as the monks grew older, they started to lose their elements, and their Wudai weapons started getting out of control. Soon it got to the point where the monks died along with the elements, and their weapons left to find their new wielders. As time passed, a new evil started rising and causing havoc using the new element of Darkness. What is the element of darkness you ask, well not much is known about it now but most people say that who ever has that element can control shadows then walk into them and come out somewhere different. The user of this element could also transport others into a shadow of perpetual darkness, which is what he did to wuya when she apposed him. This person with the element of darkness is trying to take over the world and his name is Luke Torom. Soon the Wudai weapons and the elements then found their new masters that would be destined to save the world. As for the Shen Gong Wu, they spread throughout the world in new places awaiting their new users, and as for Dojo, he had been locked in the secret volt at the old Temple for one thousand years waiting for someone to set him free.
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