Chance (Short Story)
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January 17th, 2007, 08:34 PM
Almighty Delicious One
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In your pants. o.o
As with Loyalty, I like this a lot. The only problem is... well...
WHERE'S THE REST OF IT I NEED MOAR OMFG!!!!1o1ne
Seriously, though, this is lovely. Everything is just so perfect: It's just so charming, and I'm finding myself becoming more and more attached to the characters as the story goes along. (And I must say, I'm really liking Morana: She's a highly entertaining character.) Oh, and the humor is just wonderful. I found myself snickering quite a few times.
And darn it, you know just how to keep a reader hooked! I can't stop wondering what's going to happen next, especially with the current installment. (Agh, so many questions! Like, 'What's gonna happen to the Growlithe and Chance!?!', 'Why won't the Rat ever have children!?!', 'What did the main character hit his head on!?!' and 'What's the main character's naaaaaame!?!', to name a few.)
Yeah... that's all I really have to say, except 'Keep up the good work' and...
OMG WHEN R U GOIN 2 ADD MOAR OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!11one
Taste me, I'm delicious! ;D
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