Chance (Short Story)
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February 19th, 2007, 03:53 AM
The Game is Afoot!
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: In a House
I apologize profusely that I missed this chapter being posted. Now, to cheer for it!
Give me a C!
Give me an H!
This is taking too long! Just finish the cheer!
Yesh, now that was an exciting final chapter. Oh thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. You didn't kill Riley! (Yet). I'm going to guess that Chance was using Faint Attack to keep himself and Cal aloft? And what
Cal's full name anyway? I'm very bad at guessing games. Really.
Anyway, I couldn't find anything seriously wrong in this chapter (or remotely wrong) so this is where I bid this story adieu and give another whopping 9.5 outta ten. Wowza.
Keep improving or I send my Houndoom after you. Rowr.
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