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Old October 5th, 2003 (07:38 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Blaine:
That was very fast, cute nonetheless, but fast. Some advice for the next story you write in this format, remember, love doesn't come in a first meeting, unless "love at first sight" really exists. Put a little more realism in it. Just some advice, ye don't have ta follow it if ye don't want to...;;;
argh... for the last time, it's not love at firs sight. They've met for a long time (approx. 3 years) ...

I see my flaw now. I should have made it a bit longer... oh well...
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