Under the night sky (PokespecialFanfic)
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October 5th, 2003 (7:38 PM).
Join Date: Sep 2003
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That was very fast, cute nonetheless, but fast. Some advice for the next story you write in this format, remember, love doesn't come in a first meeting, unless "love at first sight" really exists. Put a little more realism in it. Just some advice, ye don't have ta follow it if ye don't want to...
argh... for the last time, it's not love at firs sight. They've met for a long time (approx. 3 years) ...
I see my flaw now. I should have made it a bit longer...
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