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Old June 9th, 2004, 12:32 AM
Brian Powell
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Chapter 3

It has been a few hours since Black Jack defeated the loudmouth, Chris Jolteon. Along with Lao Ping, Cassandra, Misty, Brock, May and Max, he sat as part of an audience member and watched Ash participating on his pokemon battle.

Alright, Bayleef! Ash commanded. Tackle attack!

Bayleef charged like a Rhydon at the opponents Donphan, sending him flying until he fell and crashed on the ground. Ash has just won his first round at the Hoenn League.

Yeah! Ash yelled triumphantly. You did it Bayleef!
Pi pikachu! Pickachu cried as he held up a V sign.

Bayleef excitedly turned round and ran at Ash. Bay bay! she cried as she leapt into the air and landed on Ash. He couldnt help but laugh as she kept on licking his face.*

(*: Licking is an animals sign of affection and friendship.)

The entire crowd stood up and gave a deafening cheer for Ash. Everyone stood up except Black Jack, as he only stayed seated and applauded him with a smile.

That night, Ash, Misty, Max, May, were at a restaurant, waiting for Black Jack and the others. Cassandra and Lao Ping came.

Sorry were late, Cassandra said.
Hey, Max said. Wheres Black Jack?
Were sorry about that as well, Lao Ping replied. But he couldnt make it tonight.
Huh? Why not? Ash asked.
Cassandra and Lao Ping looked at each in an uncomfortable manner. Lets just say that he has a lot of things on his mind right now, Cassandra replied as she and Lao Ping sat down. The others couldnt help but wonder.

Outside the Hoenn League village, Black Jack was lying by a tree with a straw in his mouth. He was reflecting on what has happened over the past few months after he left Team Rocket. First, he became Blazikens new trainer after his old trainer passed away. Then he helped Cassandra save the children of Rustboros Pokemon School. Then he noticed that some kid was calling for him while he was battling Mewtwo.

He always saw himself as a tough and merciless SOB, but for some reason he always helped others in need. While he thought about it, his Nidoking came into his view. Finished your dinner already? Black Jack asked.
Nidoking nodded.
Nidoking, Black Jack continued. Do you think that I have gone soft?
Nid? Nidoking asked. Which meant, huh?
Ah, forget it, Black Jack replied, realising that Nidoking wouldnt understand.

The next day, Black Jack was getting ready for his second round of the tournament. He walked out on the battlefield and waited for his opponent while the announcer introduced Black Jack to the audience. His opponent came out wearing sport and street clothing. He had a radio in one hand and a microphone in the other as he spoke in rhymes, introducing himself.*

(*: In other words, he was rapping.)

Yo!
So you is the famous Black Jack!
I is also famous!
I is known as the famous Mr. Mack!
Now dat I is in the Hoenn League Championship!
Ill go on the attack!
And making you go what dat!

Sad Black Jack whispered as he gave Mr. Mack a bored look.

In this round, cried the announcer. Only two pokemon can be used by each trainer! Are you two ready?
Yeah! Im ready, fools! Mr. Mack yelled.
Ready to be smashed you mean, Black Jack replied confidently.
Well then LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE!

The huge screen chose Mr. Mack to choose his pokemon first.

Before we start, fools, Mr. Mack said. How about it if I play a little music!

He placed his radio next to him and played a tape, which played rapping songs.

Ash, Pikachu, Misty, Brock, May, Max, Cassandra, her Gardevior and Loa Ping sat as part of the audience, watching the match. Why would he want to play some music? Ash thought. He then gasped as he remembered. Wait! Ive seen that strategy before! I remember now! It was a couple of years ago while I had a pokemon battle against Rudy back in the Orange Islands!

Now I choose Hitmonlee, fools! Mr. Mack yelled as he threw the pokeball. Hitmonlee popped out of his pokeball and kept on jumping in a single spot while preparing himself for battle.

Hmph! Metagross! Black Jack yelled. I choose you!

Metagross popped out of his pokeball, getting ready for battle.

Metagross! Black Jack commanded. Psybeam attack!

Metagross aimed and shot out two powerful psybeams out his eyes. But Hitmonlee dodged them as he leapt into the air while doing a leg split. As he landed on his feet, he started dancing again.

Never seen that before, but its obvious the reason why hes dancing. Black Jack thought as he spotted a radio next to Mr. Mack. That must be hes strategy.

Black Jack took out his pokeball. Metagross! Return!

It looks like hes got some other plan in mind, Ash thought.

Blaziken! Go for it! Black Jack cried as he tossed another pokeball.

Blaziken popped out of his pokeball. Blazi

Lao Ping nearly got off his seat as he saw his friend on the battlefield. Blaziken he said to himself.

Blaziken stood poised for battle and noticed that Hitmonlee was dancing, meaning that he must be very careful.

That punk kids waiting for me to attack, Black Jack thought. But as soon as I do, he might be able to counter it.

Blazikens eyes narrowed, trying to predict what Mr. Mack and his Hitmonlee are planning.

Youre keeping us waiting, fools! Mr. Mack shouted.
Black Jack and Blaziken realised Mr. Macks weakness. Well, if you hate waiting, he replied. Why dont you attack first!
Hitmonlee! Rolling Kick now!

Hitmonlee ran forward. Blaziken stood poised, ready to counter. But to his surprise, Hitmonle flipped forward to do a handstand while both his feet grabbed Blazikens head.

Hitmolee flipped his body backwards while his feet held Blazikens head and dragged it, flipping Blaziken over, and landing on his back. Both pokemon quickly picked themselves up. Blaziken was momentarily hurt as he held his back.

I meant seismic toss, fool! Mr. Mack taunted. Hehe!

That punk! Black Jack thought. He tricked us!

Thats what you get when you face Mr. Mack! Mr. Mack said. Dont forget, He has seen you battle against Chris Jolteon and he knows youre strategy, sucka!
Battles are more than just strategies, weirdo.
Yeah! Its about brawn as well! But judging by your Blaziken, Id say that he has neither!

Black Jacks eyes narrowed. Brains and brawn, eh? he thought. He wont know whatll hit him

Blaziken looked at both Hitmonlee and his trainer. He motioned Hitmonlee to come and fight him. I agree! Mr. Mack shouted as he saw that. Lets get back to kicking their butts, Hitmonlee! Jump Kick attack!

Hitmonlee kept on doing the cartwheels towards Blaziken. Blaziken stepped back a few steps until Hitmonlee leapt into the air.

Hes gonna come down real fast, Black Jack warned. Get ready to dodge!

Hitmonlee performed a dive kick at Blaziken, who dodged out of the way. Big mistake! Mr. Mack taunted. Mega kick!

Hitmonlee switched his jump kick attack to a Mega kick attack where he attacked Blazikens head with a spin kick. But to Hitmonlees surprise, he blocked Blaziken! Black Jack yelled as he saw the attack coming. Counter attack!

His fist of the other arm burned an angry red fire as he gave Hitmonlee a hefty punch in the gut. Hitmonlee was sent flying to the end of the field until he fell to the ground.

It took a few seconds for Hitmonlee to slowly pick himself up. He was in immense pain as he held his gut.

Now do you see why you shouldnt playing around with other people, let alone me? Black Jack asked. This is what you get for annoying us!

Mr. Mack had a cold sweat on his head, not knowing what to do next. Dont feel like dancing now huh? Black Jack taunted. Now Blaziken! Blaze Kick attack!

Blaziken ran like a speeding bullet and aimed his blaze kick attack at Hitmonlees gut. Block that attack, Hitmonlee! Mr. Mack ordered.

Hitmonlee held one of his hands out, ready to defend while the other held his injured body part. But Blaziken tricked Hitmonlee by jumping on his defensive hand and then both his feet smashed and bounced off Hitmonlees face. Blaziken somersaulted backwards and landed on his feet while the back of the head of Hitmonlee hit the ground hard, knocking him out. It looks like were even, Black Jack said.

Hitmonlee was no longer able to battle. With frustration in his eyes, Mr. Mack called him back. Golduck! he shouted. Go smash that Blaziken to bits!

Golduck pooped out of his pokeball. He does his little dance routine because of the music that Mr. Macks radio was playing. Blaziken responded by folding his arms and tapping his foot, waiting for Golduck to make his move.

Golduck! Mr Mack cried. Ice Punch attack!

Golduck began moving towards Blaziken while doing flips and somersaults, trying to confuse him. Black Jack focused on Golducks movements, so did Blaziken.

Golduck leapt into the air. Its coming from above! Black Jack warned.
Blaze! Blaziken replied.

Golduck went to land his icy fist on Blazikens face. Blaziken went to counter the attack with his fire punch attack. Both punches collided; only Gol****s ice shattered to pieces and his fist took damage at the same time. Golduck landed on his back, holding his injured hand.

As Golduck picked himself, Blaziken got himself ready to attack again. Blaziken! Black Jack yelled. Comet Punch attack and Rolling Kick!

Neither Mr. Mack nor Golduck had time to react when Blaziken leapt forward and performed a series of punches and kicks on different parts of Golducks entire body.

Fury attack and Sky uppercut! Black Jack ordered. Blaziken continued his attack when he formed his hands into a type of a bird pokemon as he kept on poking viciously at Golducks chest, ending the attack when he sent Golduck into the air with an uppercut. Golduck fell hard on the floor.

Having enough of seeing his Golduck getting beaten up by Blaziken, he decided to use his elemental advantages against him. Golduck! he cried. Water gun attack!

Golduck immediately got up, leapt backwards, breathed in and let out huge foam of water out of his mouth.

Blaziken! Black Jack ordered. Counter it with your Sky Uppercut and Fire Spin!

Blazikens paw burned an angry red fire. He let out a huge uppercut into the air as he and a huge fiery whirlwind came from the ground because of his momentum to counter and evaporate Golducks attack. Not only that the air was hot, but there were also strong and heavy winds around everyone in the arena.

Everyone held on to their seats, trying not to get sucked into the fiery whirlwind. Some of them covered their eyes so that dusts wouldnt get into their eyes. Misty lost her grip of her seat and was being sucked in. Misty! Ash cried as he grabbed hold of Mistys hand.

The only person and pokemon was standing confidently was Black Jack and his Blaziken.

The one that was mostly in danger was Golduck as he looked at the whirlwind with fear and took a few steps back while it was coming closer and closer. Mr. Mack was too distracted by the whirlwinds force, trying to not get sucked in. There was nothing they could do.

Golduck tried to run away but was caught by the whirlwind. The force around him made him spun around and around. Not only that, he was also receiving damage by the heat of the fire.

It took some time for the attack to end. As the whirlwind slowly disappeared everyone looked back on the battlefield. It turned out that Golduck was lying on the floor, unconscious. Mr. Mack and his Golduck lost the battle, and Black Jack and his Blaziken won.

No! No! No! No! No! NO! NO! NO! Mr. Mack cried as he fell to his knees. He then got out his pokeball. Golduck, get back in here

Everyone stood up after seeing the amazing victory that Black Jack and Blaziken pulled. The one that was the most enthusiastic was Lao Ping. Blaziken! You did it! he cried.

Black Jack walked close to the spot where Blaziken was standing. Blaziken turned to see his current trainer. Old man Wong must be very proud of you, Black Jack said in a caring tone.
Blaze Blaziken replied as he looked up into the skies. A small teardrop ran down his face.
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