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Old August 30th, 2007 (08:04 PM).
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: In the dark future
Age: 9
Gender: Male
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Yeah, I know this isn't much, but...
This chapter does seem a bit rushed, but it holds a lot of detail and emotion as well.

I suppose the Treecko in the story is similar to Ash's Pikachu in some ways. (With the whole Pokeball thing.)
I can't wait for the future chapters.
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