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Old September 10th, 2007, 09:44 PM
Maze
Beginning Trainer
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
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I have to say, this fic has impressed me with the power of the characters' relationships. You've done so well conveying the bond between treecko and Jeff because their "owe you for this one" scenes are so intense. They've been through a lot already and their friendship is strong, it's admirable, they're made for each other. The gameboy plot...I wasn't even bothered by it because of your strong characters. The battle choreography is nice and well thought out, too. I'm diggin' this fic, Griff! i'll be back for chapter six.

I tried to read at serebii, but that forum is down so often.
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