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Old September 15th, 2007 (10:11 AM).
The Infinite Devil Machine
Obvious, with hindsight
 
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I really liked this one. The battle scenes could have been written better, but they weren't the bulk of the chapter anyway. Treecko and Corphish seem to be friendlier to each other. You gotta love Jeff beating his rival and then losing the girl. Kinda makes this fic title wrong, huh? :p
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