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Old September 30th, 2007, 05:25 PM
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diamondpearl876
you can breathe now. x
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Illinois, USA.
Age: 21
Nature: Careful
I don't think there was an overwhelming amount of events here. =P

I liked this chapter like all of the other ones; I guess that shouldn't be too surprising.

You did really well with the description of Piplup and making the reader feel sorry for it (in my opinion, at least). I'd kick that trainer's ass and leave. XD

Anyway, thanks for letting me beta this chapter as well, and keep it up!
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