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Old October 7th, 2007 (05:03 PM).
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Join Date: Jul 2007
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Wow, that chapter was so long...and emotional. I love these kinds of stories.

I personaly think that kind of chapter would be better suted for the end...as a climactic twist, but I still loved it.

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I actually cried a little reading the chapter. Poor Treecko...and Jeff.


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I also have a good imaginaiton, so I can "put myself into the story", like I'm really there, watching the whole thing if you know what I mean.
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