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I quite liked it a lot, but not a big fan of a Treecko getting shot as you could probably tell -_-. Despite that, it was a very good "come-back fic", good description and emotions. And I liked that the Scizor killed all of the humans in the forest :P
Good job, and I'm looking forward to more of your works.
PS, you should add descriptions to your pokemon. Assume we never heard of a Farfetch'd or a Rhyhorn (because some haven't o_O). Its kind of just a rule of thumb.
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