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Old December 27th, 2007 (01:18 PM).
Lash Lash is offline
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Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Mesa, Arizona
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This isn’t a game, Giovanni… But corrupting the balance you have doomed yourself.
That was the only mistake I could find. Other than that, everything else was great- From the imagery of the chapter to the end of the chapter with the attack, and the plot.. All I have to say is wow. Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I also like the fact that this is no PG-13 Fanfic with the mentioning of drugs, and usage of lethal weapons.
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"Jimmy you are forever in our hearts"


And **** you 2009 for taking him from us.
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