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Old January 14th, 2008, 03:54 PM
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I actually enjoyed the intensity this fic has. LOL, you definitely describe the killing of Oak very violently, what with the shattering and splitting of the bone, blood bursting everywhere. It was very entertaining and violent. Me-like-violence! As long as you continue to write this RP, I'll follow and review it when ever I can.

Only problem I have is with this:

Who is the hero? If not, there must be some sort of anti-hero? Then again, there has only been one chapter. But like I said, I enjoyed the violence.

More violence.

MORE!
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