Operation Main Frame
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January 14th, 2008 (04:39 PM).
Enter The Slasher House
Join Date: Dec 2007
I actually enjoyed the intensity this fic has.
I enjoy bringing out the horror Pokemon was truly made for, yes.
LOL, you definitely describe the
of Oak very
, what with the
shattering and splitting of the bone, blood bursting everywhere
. It was very entertaining and
Let me just type random words in bold and red like
It wasn't meant to be
It was meant to show you what's at
in the story.
Only problem I have is with this:
Who is the hero? If not, there must be some sort of anti-hero? Then again, there has only been one chapter. But like I said, I enjoyed the
The hero has a name, and shall be revealed in chapter two... These are the antagonists, obviously.
There shall be plenty, my friend.
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