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January 19th, 2008 (8:37 PM).
i want the puppy
Join Date: Oct 2007
Love it. The precise way you worded it makes the reader begin to understand your main character, which gives it a lot of that feeling. It's the kind of prologue you look at and this, "Wow. This is gonna be one heck of a good fic!"
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