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Old March 15th, 2008, 07:23 AM
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darth meanie
Beginning Trainer
 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Looking good as a start, but a few suggestions.
Your routes look so narrow, but Oak's Lab is far too sprawling.
Also, I would try to put the text in a more familiar style.
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