The Retelling of Pokémon Colosseum
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April 4th, 2008, 12:12 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: On my own world....
I tried to be critical as I read this story, but I could only find two grammatical mistakes, other than that it's a great story.
Wes was bemused to why Cipher had given such a kid a Shadow Pokemon - despite having a decent Swablu that gave Makuhita a hard time, when commanding his Shadow Slugma to use Shadow Rush, he left his Iggybuff wide open to a powerful attack, sending him high into the air.
Uhm, it's IGGLYBUFF, not IGGYBUFF.
the girl who could somehow see Shadow Pokemon are together?
Together with who? I get what you meant, but the sentence was misworded.
WHAZZA SHIGGA WABBA HOO!!!!
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