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Old April 6th, 2008 (10:04 AM).
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how unfortunate
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I didn't find too much wrong with this chapter. It was really funny, though! ^^ You're so original!

“‘The Official Game Guide to Pokemon Colosseum’? That’s odd, didn’t think Pyrite could have any games, let alone game guides - hey, it looks like Espeon on the cover! And look that this one - ‘Curious George and the High-Voltage Fence’…”
Loved that! xD

"I love Pokemon! I got my own yesterday and I’m so very happy! Anyway, are you cheering for anyone, any friends in the Colosseum challenge?”
I'll assume you forgot to hit the shift key. ;D

“Espi…” (No, they really are drunk…)

“Umbre…” (I wonder what beer tastes like…) Umbreon wondered.
Oh my gosh. xD I was rolling here. It's great to know my favorite Pokemon wants to know what beer tastes like. :3

Can't wait for the next chapter!! ;D

i might not be flawless but you know i gotta diamond heart
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