It seems pretty good to me, and if you decide to make it I'll be in it.
My Character's profile is below.
Appearance:Tall about 6'5'', Longer black hair with single dark red streak near right ear, looks kind of like Volkner, Has A yellow coat with small flames at the bottom.(couldn't get picture to show up)
History:has won all leagues, finished complete PokeDex, beaton all contests
Personality:kind, caring, & helpful but can be cold or mean
Moveset: Heart Swap, Hydro Pump, Hydro Cannon, Surf
Personality: Kind and loving
Appearance:Slightly smaller than average Manaphy,SHINY
Move Set: Volt Tackle, Iron Tail, Thunder, Thunderbolt
Personality: Wants to battle alot and is quirky
Appearance: average for Pikachu, SHINY
Move Set:Flamethrower, Blast Burn, Mega Kick, Fly
Personality: Protective of Master
Appearance: Larger than average Charizard, SHINY
Has also Darkrai, Venusaur, Blastoise, all SHINY but hardly uses them