Thread: FireRed hack: Pokemon: Shattered Dreams
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Old April 17th, 2008 (07:07 PM).
Yoshimi Yoshimi is offline
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looks good quilava's master.
the story is nice and simple yet a bit complex at the same time.
But there is a mountain error on picture 5.
you should fix those.
And maybe you should add chairs to the school because it would look pretty bad if kids had to stand.
good luck on this hack!