Ah-ho! I emerge from the battle of teh Woopahs to review!
I like the fact that you're setting up more of the army life in this chapter. Sure, this one isn't popped full of action, but it does well as a chapter to give the reader more information.
I'm hoping to see more of this hodge-podge of characters (a few of which remind me of characters from another book >.>).
No mistakes were spotted. *salutes*
And holy simoly...I just noticed that it took me two months to review. XD; Whoops.