Thread: Finding Courage
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Old April 23rd, 2008 (8:14 PM).
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Ah-ho! I emerge from the battle of teh Woopahs to review!

I like the fact that you're setting up more of the army life in this chapter. Sure, this one isn't popped full of action, but it does well as a chapter to give the reader more information.

I'm hoping to see more of this hodge-podge of characters (a few of which remind me of characters from another book >.>).

No mistakes were spotted. *salutes*

And holy simoly...I just noticed that it took me two months to review. XD; Whoops.
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