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Old May 3rd, 2008, 07:59 PM
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Originally Posted by SilverSmeargleSplatter View Post
Oh my gosh!

I love eet! :3

But, in some spots, there were too many syllables, and some rewording could've been done.

But I love it nonetheless!!
Thanks! It's really tough matching up syllables, especially while trying to come up with something that sounds somewhat coherent and still rhymes, though.

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Originally Posted by bobandbill View Post
Wow, nice work with that! Throughly enjoyed that - worked well and everything. Seemed to come out quite well and smoothly - the places with an extra syllable or two still fitted in well to the tune, and it's frankly impossible to incorparate it perfectly.

Oh dear, I fear this is better than another 'song parody' that I've come up with eariler for a super-soon upcoming chapter... oh well - quite nice.
Awesome! Actually, for the full effect, you should take a look at the related scene in chapter 44 in my main fic (on that other forum). Methinks you'll like who sings it in the context of the story xD

Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad y'all liked it!
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