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Old June 27th, 2008 (03:53 PM).
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Very nice, chilling description. Since people have already pointed out motive, the only other thing I was wondering about is character description; how old is Claire, is there any trace of evil in her physical being, etc. I was just trying to picture her, and couldn't decide whether she was very young, or just acting that way to be creepier. In the end though, well done, I'm definitely going to check this out once you start posting it.
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