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Old July 11th, 2008 (11:35 AM).
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Oi! That was great! It made me all happy and bubbly inside! My stories are all so depressing! This is definately one of the better oneshots, or any writing, in this section.

I love this one! Post your other oneshots when you find the time!

I didn't really see and grammar or spelling errors, just a few capitalization errors is all. But seriously, that was just awesome. Keep up the fantasic shipping work!

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