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Old July 17th, 2008 (07:51 PM).
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Aww! So sweet. You should get more comments than just one. I loved the whole friend vs lover battle in his head. It was realistic hugely in that sense. I loved the excuse he gave for the kiss and the little joke at the end. Well if this gave SSS a "happy and bubbly feeling" I wonder what she would do if she read mine. My type goes into more detail about the kissing. But it is hard to read you own work and get the same feeling that you get from reading others. Sweet and Great. Excellent ending. Since an excellent one-shot deserves an excellent rating, that is what you shall get.
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