Thread: Darkened Heart
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Old July 20th, 2008 (02:45 PM).
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Somewhere, over the rainbow . . .
Age: 23
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Nature: Modest
I'm kind of an amateur at poetry, so I don't really know what the rhyming/meter terms are >.< All I know is I write what I feel

My heart spins deeper into my soul,
Withering beneath the pain.
I feel my love growing so cold,
I rekindle it again and again.

So many times I have felt a spark
That I sought to give away.
I thought I'd found my light in the dark,
But the brightness faded to gray.

Even as the day looms near at hand,
I cannot bear to see the sun.
My life has not gone according to plan.
I think that I've lost the one...

Comments, criticism?

~BR
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