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August 25th, 2008 (2:49 PM). Edited August 25th, 2008 by Jaydin Knight.
In the middle of nowhere, suburban USA
Element - I like your plot and screenies and stuff - but uhh, there's ONE thing that's just bugging me. The grammar in your dialogue (like, in the game) is lacking. For example, thief is spelt 'thief', not 'theif'....
Sorry, I'm just really nit-picky about that stuff. It makes it look more professional with proper grammar. When someone's angry and it's in all caps, that's fine - I just think it would be better with more accurate punctuation and spelling.
Again, I love the rest of your work! And if you need help with the dialogue, I'd be happy to help. xD Good luck and good work!
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