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Old September 4th, 2008 (08:41 PM).
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He held one of my hands, stroked my head.
That was actually intentional. I think it works grammatically, but if it reads weird then I can change it.

Speaking of music in commercials, I saw a car commercial the other day set to "Technologic." I was stunned. I think the car was a Lincoln something...I wouldn't have even remembered the brand had it not been set to that song.
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