This seems really interesting and I like your style, but that was expected. I hate tiny devouring things, though but I love meteors. I want to know where the story goes from here. Ah, how cruel you were to that poor Absol! *shivers*
It's just too bad I'm not native with this language, because it really affects how much I like writings. It's not as easy or fast to read for me than Finnish would be and that's why I tend to miss important things (like: "whoops! It was that Absol who just got devoured! How come I didn't notice before?". Also, many stylish phrases, idioms and words ase wasted on me ;_; What a cruel world this is!
But seriously, despite all that, I think I love this. Gotta wait and see, huh?