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Old October 16th, 2008 (05:53 AM).
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I like where you're going so far. :3 Starter evolution lines that are different from the norm always interest me, because it shows that the game creator has the guts to try something new. =D I like the game's name too. One thing I would watch out for is typos in the game script and cliche storylines-- the backstory with Arceus and the land and sea legends is good, but the whole team xxxx getting legend xxxx is, as you know, done to death. Maybe give it a twist?

...Heck, I'm even driven to help out. xD I'll drop you a PM.