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Old November 6th, 2008 (02:51 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Manaphyman:
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I don't think that is necessary. If you do want to put that in, then do it another way.

I really like the way you described the tools of the trainer, very interesting, very interesting indeed.

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Great story, can't wait to read more [/n00b review]
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