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Old November 15th, 2008 (10:57 AM).
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Quote originally posted by darkcowboy:
I don't know why but for some reason it put an image of him jumping and coming down off screen with a loud clang and stuff goes rolling across the floor. XD I'm weird, but it made me laugh. X3
Ahhahaha! That's what should have happened. ...I'll save that idea for later. XD

Also, blargh. I just noticed that mistake. The sentence should be:

"Bill jumped at the booming voice that filled his formerly silent room."

Why do I not see this sort of thing before I post a story? ;_; I'll have to go back through and look at the chapter to see if I screwed anything else up. Thanks for including that in your comment.
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