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Old November 15th, 2008, 01:14 PM
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DamianLeonhart
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Flat Rock, IL
Gender: Male
Nature: Naughty
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Originally Posted by PokemonOI View Post
well guys I tried my hand at sugimori art and well here it is. I know I still need to work on the style but I also need your opinion so here. Also I think I'm doing fakemon.
I really feel like I am being mean here, but that's pretty bad. It looks like it was done in paint, it is all choppy and the shading for the white to black transition is an eyesore. I will add to what Blazers08 said while agreeing that it looks like nothing but an ordinary penguin. All of the black is a bad idea I think, because you cant tell where the body parts end or begin.

I love the work you're doing with this game and the others as well, but if it were me in your place, I would pick something else and try again.