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Old November 17th, 2008 (7:54 PM).
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Guy blinking, hehe.

Should I laugh, or just sit here and stare. I lost all thoughts when I read that, only thinking "This is so true." I have got to try my hand at this parody thing.I want to find the stories like this, just so I can laugh my head off. And maybe actually help the authors of said stories get better. Maybe. I got lost in the mindless ranting of the story, but that was on purpose, right? The events happened so sudden, but it seemed like you were trying to hard to make fun of the fics people write like this and also think they are good writers. Maybe to make it seem more realistic, try to think like these people, including comments about the story.
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