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Old November 27th, 2008 (6:46 AM).
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Eevee huh? I kinda like that little fox, and this is the first non-n00b fic I've seen, or read.

I do like they way this story is turning out so far.

There are some areas that you don't put a space in between the paragraphs and there are a couple of times I noticed that you forgot a space.

I really need a new signature.
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