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Old December 18th, 2008 (6:21 AM).
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Brisbane, Australia
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The plot seems somewhat... I'm not sure how to express it. Bland? Cliché? It really lacks much needed depth (even the original games have some kind of depth in the plot, albeit not much) and really, just sounds like most other fan games out there. Apart from that, the grammar and Pokémon overworlds need work, but so far it isn't too bad.