Interesting... in a not really kind of way. I know I'm kind of being hypocritical of some of my previous statements, but if you're going to go at least half way with a story, you can't just pass it off that way simply because it's pokemon. Details are always the most important thing when you want to impress.
Flareo, Leafyo, and Vapour... I can't quite say where you derived these from but I think you may need to be a bit more original.