Pokemon Giovanni (feel free to critique)
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December 24th, 2008 (09:22 AM).
angry kid and a keyboard
Join Date: Nov 2008
To be honest, just come up with something better. I don't know how to say this, but you're not going to finish this. The story is just too lacking in material and appeal. And because I can't get into your head, I'm not exactly sure how to help you...
As a rule though, kings don't work in pokemon. Neither do governments, strong stories, or backwoods german styles (which is how I imagined this to look).
Will NOT be here next week.
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