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Old December 29th, 2008 (12:00 PM).
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Not exactly my idea of a great story... Try adding explanations for events, instead of something happening. Nothing happens without an outside force to act on it, if you learned anything from Mr.Newton.
What do you do on said island, anyways? What is your reason for making this game? How will it be appealing to other viewers of your idea?
For that matter, what is the purpose of this game? What is your goal?
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