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Old January 19th, 2009 (7:57 AM).
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Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: CT
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Plot: ***.5
As Agent Zero pointed out, you still have some plot holes to iron out. One of the main questions left unanswered by the story is whether you are accepting the events that occurred in other regions in this game. I'm also slightly unsure about the poachers. Would this be the cliched, cut-and-dry syndicate of previous games, or would it be a loose organization of outlaws. Although much of your story seems well-written thus far, I cut off some points due to the plot holes and unanswered questions (and not the good kind, either).
Features: ****.5
The concept of having one gym for every type is intriguing, but seems like it would be difficult to pull off. The concept of missions with actions and reactions (in a style like those in Fable), is refreshing, especially for the normally bland pokemon series.
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