First off, I really like the format of this story. It makes it so much easier to read than other stories.
You have really nice description in the first two chapters, and I love how you have ended both chapters.
Poor Danny has such low self esteem! But I'm looking forward to how he'll develop.
Hehe, I can imagine Nurse Joy being a tad overworked in Viridian.
I'd like to see some more plot, but I'm not worried cuz it's only chapter 2!