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Originally Posted by Buizel 9
Omg Dante you never told me about this ! :O
Well everthing is looking good, but not the english. 
Well good luck my best friend! :D |
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you are perfectly right I befriend XD
there are many errors of grammar...
I hope to receive your help for this
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Originally Posted by deadlyangel91792
very nice its pretty ill give you that all you need to work on is your grammer and youll have something really breathtaking
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thank you man
the my grammer error are horryble!
but I am sure that with the help of everybody and with your signalings I will succeed in correcting these errors