Cool! A Dante production!
Anyway, most of the grammar in the Pics are OK,
but I spy very little grammar mistakes in Pic 9, Pic 16 and Pic 19.
Pic 9: It should be: Hey you! Stop right there! That is my backpack!
Pic 16: It should be: Now you can't escape from me anymore!
Pic 19: It should be: Hey Landon! Have you brought my bag?