Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old February 28th, 2009 (12:58 PM).
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Incinermyn
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Wisconsin, USA
Age: 28
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Yeah, I've never had much use for betas myself. They get TOO preachy about minor stuff, and it usually takes a lot more time to get stuff done than it would if you were writing without their so-called "help."

But, I'm glad you got this up finally, Dagzar.

Damn, where do I begin? No real mistakes from what I spotted, but it seemed like there were some pretty suspenseful spots in this chapter that got me wondering how stuff was going to turn out. That kind of took me aback to another fic I've been reading, Anima Ex Machina, for some reason. Maybe because it wasn't just the stale drama too many other fics work with, and was something a little fresher.
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