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April 4th, 2009 (08:06 AM).
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It wasn’t the best excuse, especially since she was the one that wanted
to leave so badly, but how could she know that she was going to get caught in up in a freaking storm?
That Is the only mistake that jumped out at me.
A/N: Hey guys, I have a question, though it’s hard to explain. In a sentence, for something laying on the ground, would you use ‘laying’ or ‘lying’? It’s a question that’s been bugging me for a while and I suppose now’s a good time to get an answer.
Also, do you guys think there’s something wrong with the chapter? Like pacing issues or maybe illogical character actions…? I have to ask this because there’s something bugging me about the chapter, but I can’t tell what (except for the sucky conclusion).
Correct me if I'm wrong, but "laying" would be correct, because "lying" is the act of telling a lie.
And I did not see anything wrong with the chapter.
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