Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old April 6th, 2009 (11:55 AM).
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Loved this chapter, but does it have to be a two-parter? Just, experience has taught me that when you break stuff up, it destroys your story more often than not (at least that's what through me off in my last version of Dark Nostalgia).
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