Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old April 10th, 2009 (03:10 PM).
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A few typos, but good chapter. It's great to see Leah finally trying to bond with Sands. Can't wait for next week!

(Also, a little piece of advice: I've noticed that sometimes, you forget words. So, I would suggest re-reading each sentence after you've typed it. It's a lot easier than reviewing your whole chapter, and it works too.)
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